she sits alone at the bar
sipping her cosmopolitan
the red drink reflects
sipping her cosmopolitan
she waits for something or nothing
a drunken flush on her cheeks
she waits for something; nothing
extraordinary in appearance
a drunken flush on her cheeks
reflects her soft pink shirt
extraordinary in appearance
the mirror behind her
reflects: the soft pink shirt
her cigarette burning slowly
the mirror behind her
holds disapproving glances
her cigarette burning slowly
glows a firey red
with a disapproving glance
the bartender pours another drink
glowing a firey Red-
her healing elixer
the bartender pours another drink-
the Red Drink: Reflect.
her healing elixer-
she sits alone at the bar
A very sad undertone, you have painted quite the picture with your use of imagery. I enjoyed the write.
I see this was posted over a year ago? I think you should post more. I really liked this a lot. Great imagery. I could really feel what you were trying to say. I would continue writing/posting more