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Young Man
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Vintage Words .
Stop worrying the future
like a clock that will not tick
fast or tock the way you
desire.
.
Experience is wanting
and worry can not help
any venture excel absent
appropriate skills when
he wants to excel but
is forced to angle toward
dreamless walks.
.
Wish and will away. Stumble
head long into the map of a fate
not yours. Yes, that is your muse
whispering a rather different
destination from your shoulder.
allets
01-03-14
723p
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Oh I love this. I had to read
Oh I love this. I had to read it three times real slow before I got a big something from it. This was the first line that got me...
"when he
wants to excel but
is forced to angle
toward the dreamless
wall."
Great line..
Loved it.
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Yes Respected Mm Allets I fully agree with nightlight
Yes Respected Mm Allets I fully agree with nightlight... forced to angle because "karma" is not poetry writing. There is no "dream" of "goal" in "karma" BTW Karma helps demolish all walls within the ignorant mind. ~~ a~dabbler~in~the~alphabets
©bishu
A 2014 Goal
To write something beautiful and hopefully wise - glad you got the big something, a gift for 2014's beginning :D slc