Beautifully wrapped, sound advice, through and through.
"Sing a new view unfelt,
unheard."
That may be my favorite line pair here, though there's so many to choose from. But I find them to be a gentle nudge that is at the heart of it all.
Such profoundness in "the sole and lone only / is the gem under water / the precious metal / separated from stone". You have yourself, in this poem, once more separated a gem from stone.
Not a lot of method, message paramount. So much going on globally. I just reposted my ENGLISH FOR POETS series. Clay feet, firmly planted, foot loose - it is good to have a foundation. Poetry fever-better than Covid-19, that's fo sho!
Eloquent, in itself : )
Beautifully wrapped, sound advice, through and through.
"Sing a new view unfelt,
unheard."
That may be my favorite line pair here, though there's so many to choose from. But I find them to be a gentle nudge that is at the heart of it all.
Such profoundness in "the sole and lone only / is the gem under water / the precious metal / separated from stone". You have yourself, in this poem, once more separated a gem from stone.
These are my favorite lines also
In a mood to write it down uniquely, as self-advised. P ;D
When it comes to advice,
..always have it right in the home, first : ) As you have.
Lately
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Not a lot of method, message paramount. So much going on globally. I just reposted my ENGLISH FOR POETS series. Clay feet, firmly planted, foot loose - it is good to have a foundation. Poetry fever-better than Covid-19, that's fo sho!
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~A~
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