somebody is you
someday is for me
don't know when
when someday and somebody meet
the sun is rising
and we playing
at that time we not
someday and somebody
the race of life
change our path of life
change our section
somebody is you
cause i want to meet you again
i want my friend back
in back way, in back style
cause i always remember that back
i don't want to talk in formatily
i don't want that smile
which we do for strangers
someday is for me
someday i get you
the true self of yours
and make you feel
make you smile
for your own friends
not for strangers
i want that time back
i want that truth back
somebody is you and
someday is for me
i want to say this to sanctus
i want to say this to sanctus that who is he to tell us what should we have to do or not, so please stop your nonsense
I'm not telling you what to
I'm not telling you what to do, or what not to do. I am giving my opinion that you are not gifted in the poetic arts. I am giving an opinion on what I think of your attempts to write poetry. As to what you want to do, or not do, that is up to you