sweet moment, listing gently;
bringing life into every corner of my heart
not on purpose, hardly meaning
to change forever every shade and every hue
there's something different
something better
something that i never thought existed
shining from your heart and through your eyes
all at once kind and real and wise
making me wish that this could last
i left a mark to find the way
back to that moment, to that day
it's the moment i first felt
that all could be so clear and precious
that i could have what every soul desires
love
that sweet moment
forever
Hmm... another good tone change. May I suggest "something true", rather than "something nice"? Nice can be such an insipid word....