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She Lies
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Poems there she lies
like nothing matters
she's unmoved
and she don't care
i want to speak
to try her name out
leave it pendant
in the air
maybe this
is all that's due me
just this moment
by her side
i'll breathe it in
and taste its sweetness
let it wash me
in its tide
You ask me to post my thoughts, I'm not sure what to say. I really don't have many words. It's as though you're infatuated or completely mesmerized by her. i really don't know what else to say, you've rendered me speechless.
Another sigh from the heart... I would suggest maybe better format? (capitalizing, etc). Keept it up. :) - Jenn