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goodbye my son
a fathers goodbye
from the day of finding out you where in mommy's tummy
to the day of the first ultrasound i knew you would be a boy
u kicked,rolled and jumped in mommy's tummy wanting to get out
me and mommy were so happy that mateo and analyssa would be able to
have a baby brother. the days seemed to go by so slow
mommy and me used to sing an rub her belly just wishing and waiting for you to come out.
the months went by until one rainy day mommy got a tummy ache.
we had no idea what was going on we just thought mommy eat some bad chinese.
so we waited like every other parents would do hoping that it will go away.
mommy and sissy went to sleep and me and you stayed up while they were snoring away.
u kicked so much an u held my hand for the first time. than mommy woke up hurting so bad.
so daddy took mommy and sissy to the hospital to make sure u were ok.
we waited for hours on end hoping and praying that u will be ok
than the doctor finally came in and gave us the bad news, the news that
god had took you back home.
mommy was so hurt and confused, my words couldn't even comfort her.
so we went up the doctors room because mommy still had to give birth to you
when i layed eyes on you my heart broke in to a million pieces.
like all the parents out there me and mommy had to say the words no one would want to say to there child
good bye my son i know god haves you know
May you find strength in your
May you find strength in your writing,in your writing where you are strong... In your writing, sadness exists, but it is in your writing where sadness is confronted and conquered.
I have been you, but I am me.
I'm thankful for reflections, I'm thankful I am not the mirror.
God bless.
Moncies A. Franco
This is beautifully written,
This is beautifully written, but incredibly sad. Still, just beautifully written.
This poem is so beautiful,
This poem is so beautiful, God bless you!
-Brittany M. Diaz
so sorry
for your loss, The death of a child is the hardest type of loss, it must feel is as if the life is sucked right out of you. I can only surmise the pain and anguish it seems as if his life was abruptly and unfairly cut short. I would feel cheated if one my children died before me, and they are grown with children of there own...
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot