This is so cliche'
I'm ashamed to say
Our love is like a red, red rose...
Or mayhap not.
In my lifes travels
I've heard it said
That red roses are passion
White roses are love
But if they ever come together
Death is to come,
And takes it all
Six feet under-ground.
So I have concluded
That our love is pink
Not red for passion, not white for love
And deffinately not a combination
That brings death to our door
But pink, for some love
Some passion, that creates
Hugs and cuddles, as well as our sweet kisses.
But ours is not a garden rose
All tame and domestified
Our love didn't grow, all nice and slow
It burst out of nowhere,
All wild and scraggly, and spread all about
Rather rapidly.
Our love isn't perfect, like a little granny's
Garden rose, but with faults
That makes a unique, and beautiful love
Just as beautiful, and rare
As a pink, wild rose...
GOOD POINT
ON THIS PIECE