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Two Words
"Can you get me a pop?" she asked
as she watched him walk away
she watched him sleep with his arm around her
and crush her heart the next day
Hes the boy everyone has had a crush on
the one you dont get over
the one you always want to love
and you want to stay sober
just to remember his face
that look in his eyes
but that isnt your place
and your heart slowly dies.
Holding hands and stroking thighs
Locking lips and locking eyes
the lowest low and highest highs
longing hugs, and unending cries.
It was all a dream
except the pain
that was real.
and I wonder
what would it have taken
two little words
kiss me?
Very good, very good indeed. To be honest though, I didn't like the ending too much, but everything up until the last line was superb. It was very heartbreaking to read, especiallu for anyone that has loved and lost.
Good Work!