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Love Life and Lust

i see your face

passing in a crowd

i want to tell you how i feel

want to shout it out so loud

just to kiss your lips

feel that intensity

your hands over my hips

cloud nine ecstacy

rushing excitement

gasping for air

pressing onward

running my hands

through you hair

your heart beating so fast

this could go on forever

how long will it last

if it ended tomorrow

i could still say i had a blast

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 7:05am
©4 January 2005 - 10:23pm — _jennita_
24 January 2005 - 5:03am — G (not verified)
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Very well done, very heartfelt. You have great talent.

5 January 2005 - 7:16pm — dark_n_lost
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I love this poem.....You wrote it with such feeling....You are awesome hun....Good job Love Kayla

5 January 2005 - 2:53am — theresa (not verified)
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HUH I LIKE THE PEOM BUT I HATE THE LOVE PART CUZ THE LOVE OF MY LIFE WAS TAKEN FROM ME.*SHIGHS* TODAY SUCKED

5 January 2005 - 1:07am — fighter4life
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I think this is a great poem, I think it shows a very positive outlook on life, I like it a lot, I think it is an attitude that more people should try to adapt.