As she wondered if all intellect is like tarnished silver
under moonlight
an unimaginative moonlight
on the bay where the waves
swiftly hiss
out of the bubbles
in the swirls of the foam
while visions arise
in her offering
with dreams of a lost lover
crystalline light shatters in play
she wonders, might she be born of the rain?
now, the water falls across her verses
they are falling like tears
stirred by the poems of passing
but was this a mistake
did she completely miss the
meaning of the words?
one feeling that filled her heart
one that grew stronger
and stronger
in her soul
the perceptible, the real, the only truth,
was the view from her eyes
eyes that articulated a temptation of the feelings in her hands
there was perfect ecstasy within her pose
and she wondered if she died right at that moment
would she appear, as poetry or prose
To give life to creative
To give life to creative thoughts and ideas is wonderful, like your poem here.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
thank you
both, A. G. and Healing. I try too invoke the readers to envision a scene that they will have some connection.
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Interesting.... I liked it.
Interesting.... I liked it. Loved the ending. :)
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