late night, dark in adoration
with the prospect of desire, devotion
and doing damage
right before your eyes
this chance
this call to fate
while in this offering
it is explicit to an ecstatic state
shadows advance and prevail
as the virile escort twists
insertion insists
bare roots
thigh high boots
given to me in a jewel
of acquiescence
wild thoughts peel and permeate
then define
now is the time
putty in the hands
have molded
manipulated and designed
a language set apart
beyond compliant
sensitive caress silken feel
ripeness savored
consent produced
hardened thick
arrives and thrives
fingertips trail
dampened lips
taste sweet honey from the hive
prominent aspect peaks
and flames burn into image
surreptitiously it is revealed
limbs entwined
only incessant energies
the intensity cannot be quelled
the ascendant spirits may stimulate the pleas
words between the whispers
whispers between the moans
sizzling skin
deep within
scream
conceivably into divine
then submissive limits
grip in rapture
an arrival bone deep
breathless in the moment
the lovers rhythm
suddenly in fluid form
all wet and sweat dangling
one supreme breath, then exhaled ,then sighed…
only the piper calls a tune to which they dance
only the touch
words
unspoken
nevertheless,
there is a language
to be overheard
You have such a way with
You have such a way with words to make any poet admire you.
why, thank you
young man,
I must say, that is one of the nicest comments I've ever received.
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Your words bring thoughts of
Your words bring thoughts of stripping my mind completely naked and bearing my soul. Beauty. Sheer, stark, softness, yet powerful.
....wanna get married? ;-)
....
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
wow!
I didn't think I could have that effect, no sorry
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Lol! Was just commenting with
Lol! Was just commenting with someone else about perspective, and how we all have a different one. But I'm not one for weighing words in my free time either. Too much of that on work time. If you want to write poetry you can't be thin-skinned or write for others. Selfish writes seem to reach more readers...just not perhaps those you seek, eh??
:;-)
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
I was just
being coy, anyway, I'm not complaining, any responce is a good responce, comments for a poet are like press, for an actor, there is no bad press, just make sure they spell you nom de plume correctly, by the way, no all about the politics of life and love. And, I'll have you know, I have a hide as thicker than a rhino, nananan nanana
enjoy
http://www.postpoems.org/authors/9inety/poem/907372
really, hope you have a nice week at work...
peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Ah ! the timeless language
Ah ! the timeless language ! Nice !!
©bishu
thank you
peace
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Awesomeness! Like very
Awesomeness! Like very much.
thank you
so much
peace
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
haha i like it ;)
haha i like it ;)
thank you
it means alot to me
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot