with longing

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replete with longing,

 

longing that we can not dismiss
like the longing for a lovers kiss

 

something inside will not erase

the loss of something we cannot replace

 

like whisper softly into a lovers ear
a longing for that touch when they are never near

a longing for that someone to call honey, baby, my dear
and the longing of a reddened eye that feels a burning tear...

 

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HufflepuffNerd.22's picture

Nice!

Well written and it flows well. You can feel the longing


I question the world because it doesn't make sense. I challenge the world because I'm just that damn stubborn(Quote by me)

9inety's picture

thank you

you and your comments are appreciated


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

Jesster's picture

A feeling I know all too

A feeling I know all too well... longing can be quite difficult to live with.  


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9inety's picture

sorry, it is hard sometimes

thank you, you and your comments are appreciated

Peace

Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot