The dark
The grain
The Kansas wind
The night
The fields
Sit silently
Sit silently
Inside my head,
Inside my head
Sit silently
The red there too
It sits alone
Just sitting there
Sits silently
And quietly they wreck my mind
Inside my head
Sit silently
I wonder...
Would it be so bad?
If sat she not so silently.
Masterful Writing This
I love the cadence, the tone is quite appropriate, the juxaposition of sing-song musicality and serious contemplation and expression is emotion jangling and is as well penned as it is well read - Just Bein' Stella
Your comments are ever so
Your comments are ever so appreciated and also very professional. It always means so much to see a talented poet take time out to comment on a work of mine. Thanks so much!