PostPoems Be Artistic. Be Creative. Be Inspired!

This piece starts a transition from ten to eleven meters, but ends in free style because I believe it reflects how smoking is. After a stressful, long day or a hardship it is perfect to smoke but first it takes a procedure to set up, but once you are smoking, it is freeing and structure and worries don't matter anymore. It's just kind of something I did for fun. If I was a good singer I might turn it into a song haha. Let me know what you think! Tell me if the metaphors stand out and it is pleasing to the ear to read aloud! Comments and criticism is appreciated.