Down the Hatch

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Callis.at.the.Palace's picture
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I woke up the gutter
had a chat with the sewer
Found out I've become
another one of the others

 

Let's all get in touch,
while we finally fade away
Just wait till the ending
we're one in the same

 

Could you call me a doctor
Pour knives on my skin
My fever is my brother
He's welcoming me in

 

It's the end of the week
and every ones drunk at ten
The time where we meet
to smash our genetials in

 

Everyones at the masque
disguised as a lover
We forgot our own faces
when we all left the rave

 

Are we someone else
trying to get back our better half
snap back to the ballroom
My hand on the glass

 

Bottoms up
down the hatch
This was brewed for you
the very best of the batch

"Where do you go when nowhere feels like home?"-FBMF

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I Miss You, Chadical

Snipets of glimpsed of a life traveled metaphorically through haze - rhymed, but I won't hold it against you. "...Found out I've become
another one of the others..." Transition moment, Alice falling and arriving. Well said, well painted and felt - slc

 

 

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A Fantastic Poem I really

A Fantastic Poem I really love this. I know the thread has been dead for a long time But I felt I needed to sy something.

The darkness outside is not so frightening as the one inside. Behind knowing smiles and crocodile tears we hide our fears.

 

Being angry at someone is to give them power over you, but to forgive is to take away that power.