The Nightly Nightmare

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As the day winds down and I get a chance to be alone, I sit and start to think. From a slow sputter I start with something small, what I said. Did I need to say that? Did I take it the wrong way? Leaning back I can begin to see all things I think a fool ; me.  As my head hangs my mind opens up, it’s too much, too fast as the past erupts. Was that me today? What was I thinking! Did I really say that? No not to her; you disrespectful rat. Despite with what it starts it always ends with what remains. My deepest regrets of those most vain.  When I question myself and think of how she could be better off.  She says she loves me, that those are silly thoughts. Then it hurts a whole lot.

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I don`t see a lot of people

I don`t see a lot of people commenting on the site, hope its ok if a person does.

 

this is clean and honest, reflection" really like the ending here.