Its just my opinion, not better than any of yours. I dont know why we do it. I know I so I know you will never be successful at this.
I am pretty poor at writing and i still write better than everyone here
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7 February 2013 - 1:13am
15 February 2013 - 4:28am
#1
That's an interesting story
That's an interesting story to hear from someone who can't follow proper grammar rules. I'm not saying that one must always follow the rigid standards of Strunk and White, but writing a proper sentence so that I can actually understand what you're trying to say would prove helpful.
10 February 2013 - 10:37pm
#2
cool story bro
cool story bro
7 February 2013 - 1:14am
#3
Please prove me wrong
gumption
10 February 2013 - 8:39pm
#4
Tell you what, I'm going to
Tell you what, I'm going to have a look at some of your stuff. Saves me having to read Chaucer and/or actually do the work I'm supposed to be doing, so thanks for the rather ballsy distraction.
Equally, feel free to criticise my stuff. Lots of it is immature, sounding out excercises, so I'm sure you can rip into them.
There are some however that I currently believe to contain poise and the potential to connect well with another person through a computer screen. They are, in order date written, earliest to latest:
My Lost City
6.45 a.m.
Don't Despair, Little Bear
Winter Town
Phosphorus
Snow Tomb
Potted Pastoral
My Grandmother
I Come Across
Burned
Magnetic Cold Play
Green Tree Lodge
Feel free to pick and choose, and maybe one of them might prove you wrong. In the meantime, I guess I'll cherry pick some of yours to see what I like best.
Cheers,
Fergus
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