You take my breathe away, then all the cold and pain,
I can feel you babe, running through my veins,
I wish you were a man cause then I'd be in love
But your just a drug, they're always just a drug.
Herion
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11 September 2011 - 2:22am
15 September 2011 - 9:52pm
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Clear and to the point
I really enjoyed this. The message came across clear and it only took you one stanza! (That's much better than I can say!)
Only have one question: in the last line you mention "they're". Are you referring to men in general or drugs in general?
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