SAINTS’ BLASPHEMY

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I’ve lived so many deaths
now I fear living

there’s so much ruin
inside and around

no tattoos on breasts hide
the rusty cauldrons

none hear the raging fire
voices multiply

the darkness of earth seems
beyond verbal face

sun is stopped in temples
stones explode in hands

it’s vain to dream a new
picture of the world

the viewless shapes of gods
eternal twilight

it’s no use flying so high
the sky seems shattered

the city is haloed
in saints’ blasphemy

R.K.Singh

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nice work...almost

nice work...almost stereotypical of a modern writer.......though the title did remind me of the gunpowder plot... :)

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I like the first two

I like the first two paragraphs very much. I like the fourth paragraph. "Stones explode in hands" is good. And the last line is good.

(Just my opinion)

Thank you Mr. Singh

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mY POEM

Thanks for appreciating my poem.
R K

R.K.Singh