Eventide

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Eventide
Over the rolling hills and bottomless valleys
I rode with a dreamy blue eye Sally
Her sandy blonde hair billowed in the breeze
She clutched me tightly with delicate knees

Shades of crimson and wisps of violet
Engulfed all in blissful scarlet
As our lonely Sun dwindled
Unfathomable beauty was rekindled

Upon the hilltop the drifters observe
this ghostly haze slither beneath the curve
As the golden rays caressed her face
she was basked in unprecedented grace

For once nothing was out of place
Departing in remnants of purplish trace
The long days and pleasant nights
of chasing sunsets out of sight

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It's soft and silky in the

It's soft and silky in the way it flows & everything is delicately put. I love it.

Not_A_Somalian_Guy's picture
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Well - written & well versed

Could very well envisage myself ... Your imagery is vivid and the best thing I like is that although it's your words out there .. the imagery I see is mine ... and that's an awesome aspect of a poem ..

Great work ... Would love to have an even handed review of my poems if time permits. Would appreciate it ... :)

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