Hello everyone! I would love some good, honest criticism on this piece. Thank you!
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Foamy waters, wave at me
Smiling from across the sea
Glistening with joyous glee
Oceans, hear my calling plea
Bring me to your harmony
I’ll breathe the air that sets me free
And spend my days with just thee
Me and my best friend, the sea
We’re as alike as two can be.
