Dear Sanity

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Dear Sanity,
I'm sorry you have to leave so abruptly
and I cannot say you will be missed,
but our time together was much too long
and now I'm much too free
to bother with you now.

You were always such a strain,
such a great burden to bear,
but now you've gone, off my shoulders
and I can dream once more.

As a child you sucked me in,
eager for the world
but now I've seen it and I must say
it's simply not for me.

So I will say what I like
whenever I decide
and I will live my own life
no matter who denies.

So, Sanity, my former friend,
I must ask you to leave.
Because I don't have time any more
to waste away with you.

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"As a child you sucked me


"As a child you sucked me in,
eager for the world
but now I've seen it and I must say
it's simply not for me." 

This was a really great line! 

 Also, I really like the idea that we 'waste away' with sanity. 

 

 I've read a lot of your poems, I think you are an amazing poet! 

My favorites are The God, The People and The Child, The Soul Of The Tree, When The World Ends, Death Is But A State Of Mind, The Sky Is Purple, I Am Happy (Help me), Dear Time, and The Painted World. 

 

The Sky is Purple really amazed me. 

 

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