Poem...(Please Ctrique)

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Willing and witty were our words
So why has silence become our swords?
Locked like loot, was my love lying
Eventually answering calls of crying

Sharing secrets in solitude
I gave all my thoughts to you
Hearing your heart yearn for help
I tried to feel how you really felt

Prior to your presence upon my door
My heart knew nothing of the floor
But moods and minds changed in May
Particularly yours and in a peculiar way

But willing and witty were your words
So why is silence now your sword?
Darker and distant, day by day
Determined to go the opposite way?

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Thanks...

I guess half the fun in poetry is making people think and guess but I just feel like saying how I really feel right now. Hopefully if I get a little better I can get away from some of the cheap rhymes and straight forward messages. But anyways I am more than thankful that you read it and gave some advice. I'll keep writing, hope you do that same.

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