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So many lost souls
I can ( now - remove this )see it's not just me
Some of us ( are - remove this ) still fighting to be found
Some of us will never be found
Lost in a world of waste
How long am I willing to wait
How much more can I truely take
How many more times will I get back up(, ( put this in net line ) when I think I've finally given up
Is this just the beginning or is it surely the end
Is my soul really lost or was it never there at all
Am I ment( spelling mistake ) to feel so broken and abused
I'm filled with sarrow( spelling mistake ) and full of pain
I can't be happy because then I feel shame
Guilt eats me up and spits me back out
I'm always filled with doubt
I rather be hated then( spelling mistake ) to be loved
So many things wrong with me I can't dig myself out
I keep crying out but i guess nothing really comes out
I get left with no answers
I can't seem to figure shit out
Someone please help me out.

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Good one for a first timer. You should seen mine. hahaha. Mine was damn crappy.

I liked the way you epressed the confusion a person feels ..really.