Pilgrimage To Sperryville And Other Poems Of Patricia Joan Jones

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Jewels I took away from Patricia Joan Jones' poem Pilgrimage to Sperryville.

 

 

 

'another sky bleeds the
memory of day,
wrings out each cloud like a rag.'

 

'Michelangelo clouds,
angel-spun'

 

'And then there is the sky after it
has bled the innocence of
morning'

 

'others come  
to drink the mountain's
heart like sassafras tea, perhaps
absorb its wisdom and
its wild strength'

 

'I take
dictation from rivers and
liquid mountains.'

 

'clocks that never take a breath
and glass mazes that don't know
how to pray
like the mountains do.'

 

'the way a distant valley can
diffuse you with its bottomless blue,'

 

 

 

 

https://www.postpoems.org/authors/patriciajj/poem/694085


 

 

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From 'The Angels of Hawksbill



From 'The Angels of Hawksbill Mountain':


'this same absurd elegance spilling all

around the shaggy forest,' 


'the days outnumber us.' 


'the taste of rivers'


'I don't speak fluent free spirit' 


 

 

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  'With purrs of light

 

'With purrs of light chanting,

with God in a swarm of stars,

with everything now perfect

in its imperfection'     Patricia Joan Jones


 

 

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  "Storms of

 

 

"Storms of Jupiter"

 https://www.postpoems.org/authors/patriciajj/poem/1103601

 

I feel as if I am entering church in commenting on this masterpiece...

a sacred relationship between mother and daughter

 

My mind loves most the following 3 lines but

 the spiritual aspect of this poem is beyond the mind.

 

'soon after we emerge into

 the seen world,

 the Earth-mind sets'

 sail and we don't

 want it back,'

 

  'like an icon worn out

 by kisses,

the sky dust is still

 holy art:

 the visible side of Heaven.'

 

''A breathing prayer 

 was once in my arms 

 and everything worth anything

 was in that minute.'

 

'

 

 

 


 

 

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lines from'On the Shores of

lines from
'On the Shores of Cepheus'
https://www.postpoems.org/authors/patriciajj/poem/1102170

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 'The sky rolled down upon

 

 

 The poem "Plunging to Heaven"

https://www.postpoems.org/authors/patriciajj/poem/1102936#comment-529757

 

'The sky rolled down upon us,

 perilous as trust, from 

 every hissing star we stole,

 like Prometheus, from a 

 black and trembling night.'

 

 

'Love was glorious obliteration.'

 

 

'these

 yesterdays—

 still drumming through me

 like a procession—' 

 

 

 


 

 

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 more jewels from

 

more jewels from Patricia

 

'I am alone with this piercing audience of stars'

 

'untouchable

sea'

 

'at this altitude

I defy the gravity of 

everything

I thought I knew.'

 

 

 

https://www.postpoems.org/comment/edit/529599

 

 

 

'the first tremor

 

of life in the

 

blind forest 

 

is music heard 

 

as light,'  

 

 

 

'mortal love

 

in too many 

 

costumes,' 

 

 

 

 

 

https://www.postpoems.org/authors/patriciajj/poem/1102170


 

 

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  lines i loved the most

 

lines i loved the most from

'A Day To Dance With'

https://www.postpoems.org/comment/edit/530102

 

 

'a ballet of cells
that choreographed itself,
nerves and love and blood
spit out of
an ancient sea,'   !! no one but you could write this

 

(re fall) 'trees soon to be startled nudes
flowing like ink in the rain.'  !!!!!! i will probably never

see a winter tree again without thinking of this line

 

'to see someone
crawl into this moment'

 

A Day To Dance With

https://www.postpoems.org/comment/edit/530102