//I would like some honest opinions here about my song. Thank you!
Thousand screams
Hear them plead for some control
You can feel their hearts tremble
No longer whole
Their eyes are made of glass
Unable to relinquish the past
Her son has departed this life
Before he drew his first breath
Only in death
May we find salvation
This life is a storm that never dissapates
A truth unveiled, to put you in your place
Such a lonely way to die
They only loved you for your lies
When all is revealed
Your pathetic life will be sealed
In an unmarked grave
In an abandoned field
I sit in the midst of their disaster
With wounds that fester and blister
Inside of my skin
I am left with nothing relevent
Show me how it is
To never be completed
To die with nothing to live for
To stand unchained, unbroken
Show me through your eyes
When you finally cross over
This life is a storm that never dissipates
A truth that has put me in my place
Such a lonely way to die
They only loved me for my lies
When all is revealed
Our pathetic lives will be sealed
In unmarked graves
In an abandoned field
My mind a causeway of emotion for the damned
A bleeding heart that can never be mended
As this torment continues, my shame is justified
I have taken away your precious gift of life
We all have our burdens to bear
A price on our heads
An angel to spare
When all is revealed
Our pathetic lives will be sealed
In unmarked graves
In an abandoned field