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Starward commented on: Silver Voice by rachel 1 year 51 weeks ago
This is provides excellent: This is provides excellent reading, but those last three paragraphs are very, very profound. I am not usually a prose reader, but I am very impressed with this one.
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crypticbard commented on: first by alxorange 1 year 51 weeks ago
Centre stage and along the: Centre stage and along the footlights!
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crypticbard commented on: The kids these days are all using this word called “ironic” by humanfruit 1 year 51 weeks ago
And that's probably the most: And that's probably the most delicious thing of all! Tolkien had his why not us!
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Pungus commented on: The kids these days are all using this word called “ironic” by humanfruit 1 year 51 weeks ago
Justice Wolf: Howl, our victim is stuffed Like the turkey he just Greedily gross gluttonized * Oh, impossible riddles Surround the cemetery- How the ghosts know, Blanketing corpses cozy
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: The kids these days are all using this word called “ironic” by humanfruit 1 year 51 weeks ago
Consumers often don't see the: Consumers often don't see the wolf at the top of the ridge, counting their calories for them.
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Pungus commented on: The kids these days are all using this word called “ironic” by humanfruit 1 year 51 weeks ago
Urban dictionary: And then there's the potential product of puzzling it all together through multiple generations and coming out with one's own personalized slanguage.
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Pungus commented on: The kids these days are all using this word called “ironic” by humanfruit 1 year 51 weeks ago
Newborn=fresh flesh: Long as you don't cry when the tordando sweeps it up and you're left with insuffient funds for your family's survival rations. Who'll be dancing then?
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: The kids these days are all using this word called “ironic” by humanfruit 1 year 51 weeks ago
Are you starting a dance crazy? Everyone do The Ironic. : A catchy dance for kids and adults, a like. We already have the steps down and don't even know it.   "I've been doing really well at managing my money this year - Should I reward myself with a sixty two inch t.v.?"
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crypticbard commented on: The kids these days are all using this word called “ironic” by humanfruit 1 year 51 weeks ago
An ironic mega-pizza! Over: An ironic mega-pizza! Over the years it would appear that each generation and cohort would  capture and be captured by certain words and phrases that stick and become their descriptors. It's an amazing phenomenon.
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crypticbard commented on: inimitable contrivances by redbrick 1 year 51 weeks ago
Ands a twisting we will go!: Ands a twisting we will go! Thanks dear Poet.
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crypticbard commented on: inimitable contrivances by redbrick 1 year 51 weeks ago
The Fuzzy novels of H. Piper: The Fuzzy novels of H. Piper Beam were among favourirte sci-fi of our growing years. And Nicholas Fisk among more recent ones, by recent meaning early 80s. THe double entendre is that Mars is the god of war hence "martian gods," hence harping at both meanings.
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Starward commented on: inimitable contrivances by redbrick 1 year 51 weeks ago
I agree completely with: I agree completely with Pungus' comment.  The poem is very somber, but after seeming earthbound (for lack of a better term), it springs---no!, unleashes---that final line on the unsuspecting reader.  I enjoy subtle science fiction poems---and this is one of the subtlest I have read in a long, long time.
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Pungus commented on: inimitable contrivances by redbrick 1 year 51 weeks ago
Even arthritics will snap: Last two lines lends a sense of scify and the thought train that proceeds to twist along.
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dhicks01 commented on: A Place by dhicks01 1 year 51 weeks ago
Thank you : Ty
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patriciajj commented on: Redemption by patriciajj 1 year 51 weeks ago
I love the way you interpret: I love the way you interpret poetry with poetry. Thank you for your infusion of brilliance and encouragement. 
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