PostPoems Be Artistic. Be Creative. Be Inspired!

Thank you kind Patricia. We: Thank you kind Patricia. We are still waiting on the medical team as there is also an accompanying stage-3 kidney disease they are looking into.

You have offered up a gift: You have offered up a gift beyond compare. May the angels hasten to note this compassion in their book of reckoning.

Thank you very, very much.: Thank you very, very much.

First, my heart and prayers: First, my heart and prayers go out to you and your baby brother in this difficult time. As with everything you write, your talent is a beacon in this deeply piercing and heartfelt expression. As exceptional as it is sorrowful. My sympathy and respect. 

Thank you, I sure do: Thank you, I sure do appreciate your comment, it is the longest comment I ever got

The poetic gymnastics, the: The poetic gymnastics, the acrobatic alliteration, the experimental metrics . . . the entire trip was a uniquely satisfying challenge.   Once I was deep in the rabbit hole, I was enjoying the mystifying artistry of it all, and although I can't say that I succeeded in unraveling every line, I admire your rare, edgy and audacious flights of diction that follow in the footsteps of groundbreaking, avant-garde word artists such as Allen Ginsberg who celebrated his eccentricity and wrote "without fear".   These lines, for me, made me feel as if I had struck gold and impressed me as the motherload of imagination:   "Murderous trance of time Wack hell out of balance"   Some opulent eloquence. You rock! 

Thanks SSmoothie for such a: Thanks SSmoothie for such a great critique, I'm happy you found this to your liking.  I was watching my shadow melt into the last of a long day, and I thought it appropriate I deliver a eulogy.