Flashes of wit made this a: Flashes of wit made this a joy to read. "Who let this in?" Great stuff. The character development is cunning and vivid through the point of view of the stranger at the bar. Loving that magical moment gone awry at the end.
I'm relishing your vibrant,: I'm relishing your vibrant, striking descriptions of this intriguing character who comes to life under your poetic spell. Your acrobatics of language are simply phenomenal. I can tell you're having a blast writing this series because the enjoyment is contagious. Following this.
I am currently: Rewritting-editng the 1st of the three chapters of The Khansmen that were published in a lit journal over 20 years ago. Painfully arduous. Wedding guest - Time to re-read Rime of the Ancient Mariner. If Biden stops faux pa-ing, I may have time to finishh last episode (S). Really fun to work on.
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haha: No need to slow down or truncate, at least not in my opinion. : )
I was honestly waiting till you were at least a couple of parts in before reading, figuring I could sit with it grouped together and read.
Don't care much for hollywood and it's nouveau riche lords: But I heard of "the event", and all I can say is that the aristocrats have been beating the drums of war so hard that the rage is even starting to enter the outer edges of their ranks. When violence is at the core of who we aspire to be, it cannot hide for long.
Thank you once more : )
I: Thank you once more : )
I saw your post in the forum. Much gratitude for that spotlight, as well. That was very generous and kind.
At least we get some of it: At least we get some of it right, when we laugh and love.
Accumulation clogs the drain. Then we throw the baby out with the bathwater, and declare we're starting fresh. Rinse, repeat.
Education is a good idea. We lean on the state to do it, though. The state will teach subservience to the state. And, of course, with the state being run by corporate interests, that means eternal consumer zombi-ism. I don't know the full answer to this. It will never work when the state is the teacher. But we can't do without education, either. My dad, as well as my mom, taught my siblings and I constantly in the home. That is essential, I think. Parents, to the fullest degree they can, must be active teachers. Morally/ethically, yes. But also, educators. It's the only way to override the system.
Presentation is significant, indeed: Where I live, these days, it's normal for a parent to introduce their children to guns. They are often introduced as a hunting tool, where-in many people here rely on success in hunting to secure enough food for the year. Teaching children how to respect and utilize the rifle is normal. In homes without children, you walk in the door and the rifle is sitting in the doorway or by someone's bed. It's not uncommon.
Having grown up in a city where the only guns I'd ever had seen where in the hands of the military occupation called the NYPD and, in rare cases, in the posession of mafia or gang members, this was very out of my imagination. But, while Nyc was relatively lacking in violence for a city, there is essentially no violence in the town I am in. No "home invasions", no armed robbery, no murder. Some of that, I would presume, is due to the way the gun is presented generation to generation, and some of it is the knowledge a would-be criminal has that if you enter someone's home, they probably have a rifle waiting for you. Then there's the space. Space is important. In the city, it was always hard to get space to cool off when upset. For people who are specifically prone to violence, this would be a recipe for disaster. There's a lot more space here, for sure. My "small" property is the size of 2 football fields.