PostPoems Be Artistic. Be Creative. Be Inspired!

That is often the best kind: That is often the best kind of poetry to write.

The "Landing Report" is a: The "Landing Report" is a clever device for an endearing and fanciful character study, brimming with all the hallmarks of quiet rebellion and confident authenticity. The subject is further illuminated by the speaker of the poem who shows a deep admiration for the highly skilled, multidimensional, barefoot maverick with a recognizable inner beauty as well as physical appeal.   It was a shrewd choice to make the observer remain detached and professional in spite of Trystan's allure because this added a subtle tension, more provocative than anything obvious or explicit.   The narrator, with a melodic artistry slipping into the professional report, remains fascinated with the free spirit's insistence on foregoing shoes to the very end. The last line has an open-ended quality; an invitation, perhaps. The unwritten story leaves an irresistible sense of possibility and intrigue.   Another celebration of love in this crucial and varied series.  

Although during my strictly: Although during my strictly controlled childhood, I was not allowed to routinely listen to "rock and roll" music, I did, at times, catch some of Tommy James' music (Crimson And Clover fascinated me for its title, and the use of those words in the lyric), and was also starting to read (in a very limited way) science fiction.  Your poem reminded me of this combination.

who says I didn't venture out: who says I didn't venture out in the storm?

just rambling on about: just rambling on about anything that crosses my mind

How could I tire of the most: How could I tire of the most poetic and persuasive validation I've ever received? You keep me reaching higher. Never-ending thanks, my gifted friend.