PostPoems Be Artistic. Be Creative. Be Inspired!

I love where you went with: I love where you went with this!   The first draft was enthrallingly beautiful, but after a bit of polishing, some white space and sonorous pacing to provide breathing room for your little bursts of brilliance, or "pixels of light" as you superbly called them, and an engaging cadence to carry your perceptions to a striking conclusion, I can only say: amazing!   Never doubt your innate gift and your extraordinary value here.     I'm deeply moved and humbled by your very supportive words. Brightest blessings.  

I wanted to tell you : I wanted to tell you I'll make it clear  You can overcome your fear  My lovely wife, when we first met Was as scared of the dark as you can get Then she saw me naked She no longer has that fright  The only problem is Now she's scared of the light!

There is a possible image: There is a possible image there of smoke rising, of incense rising, of the sacrifice of praise that rises as a sweet smelling savour and as the sunlight strikes through the tendrils the worship is received and communion is completed.

How i look forward to you: How i look forward to you wonderful insights. The heat and soul of posrpoems lives in and through you  Your comments prompted me to tidy it up a bit and give it the form it deserves. Nothing as careful and thought out as your exquisite poetic journeys that are somehow perfunctory feeling - just so right. I wish I had the discipline to go where you go instead of just catching random ideas in the pixels of light hoping they will live on and one day ill create an anthology of the goodness bits or even write the ultimate poem... that its standard will meet yours... thank you so much. With much appreciation and delight. Hugs ss

Whoah! Starward That's quite: Whoah! Starward That's quite an odyssey I think this response rivals the work! I enjoyed it just as much, though I had a triemersion  interstellar interdimensional and inner view, I loved seeing it through your eyes. I nodded sympatically often. What a grand theology and complete analysis and reverent admiration of incredible talent and rightfully so! 

"and yet here we are at our: "and yet here we are at our throats as much as in our hearts"   Word Empress, you did it again!   With dazzling acumen, rare awareness and burrowing insight, you unearthed so much about the dichotomy, the conundrum, the crazy-making complications and unspeakable treasures of our human connections. I love the laser-sharp resignation at the end: a realization that the exasperating, ever-changing scrollwork of humanity just is what it is.  "You figure it out" Love it!    So much perspective, gorgeously unveiled.  

I get the feeling we’re thinking of the same person..: I get the feeling we're thinking of the same person. By the way, if you're looking for a good laugh, check out Randy Rainbow on YouTube. He does song parodies, many about our favorite Republican. Brilliant and hilarious.