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crypticbard commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Prayer For A Friend's Sibling by J-C4113d 1 year 20 weeks ago
You have offered up a gift: You have offered up a gift beyond compare. May the angels hasten to note this compassion in their book of reckoning.
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Starward commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; All The Fish We Could Eat by J-C4113d 1 year 20 weeks ago
Your comment, and validation: Your comment, and validation of the poem, are tremendously important to me; and I am very grateful for your kind words.
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Starward commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Prayer For A Friend's Sibling by J-C4113d 1 year 20 weeks ago
Thank you very, very much.: Thank you very, very much.
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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Prayer For A Friend's Sibling by J-C4113d 1 year 20 weeks ago
Joining you in this prayer. A: Joining you in this prayer. A beautiful and benevolent gesture. 
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patriciajj commented on: scare by arqios 1 year 20 weeks ago
First, my heart and prayers: First, my heart and prayers go out to you and your baby brother in this difficult time. As with everything you write, your talent is a beacon in this deeply piercing and heartfelt expression. As exceptional as it is sorrowful. My sympathy and respect. 
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Starward commented on: scare by arqios 1 year 20 weeks ago
No words of mine are adequate: No words of mine are adequate to speak of, or to, the poignancy of this poem, and the distress and worry you must feel for your brother.  Rather than commenting on the poem as a poem, I will say, rather, that it gave me a very compelling reason to set my breakfast aside to lift him up in prayer.  I, myself, have had a couple of mini-strokes; so I have some idea how frightening they can be, either to the patient or to the patient's loved ones.  
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Pungus commented on: Podseed Soliloquy by humanfruit 1 year 20 weeks ago
Thank you, I sure do: Thank you, I sure do appreciate your comment, it is the longest comment I ever got
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patriciajj commented on: I think I remember something by Morningglory 1 year 20 weeks ago
You got it right with this: You got it right with this demonstration of what it's really like to keep it all straight in our heads. Welcome to my world. Great stuff. Love it! 
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patriciajj commented on: Podseed Soliloquy by humanfruit 1 year 20 weeks ago
The poetic gymnastics, the: The poetic gymnastics, the acrobatic alliteration, the experimental metrics . . . the entire trip was a uniquely satisfying challenge.   Once I was deep in the rabbit hole, I was enjoying the mystifying artistry of it all, and although I can't say that I succeeded in unraveling every line, I admire your rare, edgy and audacious flights of diction that follow in the footsteps of groundbreaking, avant-garde word artists such as Allen Ginsberg who celebrated his eccentricity and wrote "without fear".   These lines, for me, made me feel as if I had struck gold and impressed me as the motherload of imagination:   "Murderous trance of time Wack hell out of balance"   Some opulent eloquence. You rock! 
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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; All The Fish We Could Eat by J-C4113d 1 year 20 weeks ago
The catch of the day is . . .: The catch of the day is . . . happiness.    Delightful, the way you bring passages from the Bible into the present and make them relatable, relevant and enlivening to readers in need of a smile and a dose of encouragement. Written with lighthearted, accessible wit interwoven with personal experience and your own descriptive powers, this lyrical pleasure made the book of Luke spring to life.    A net filled with joy. 
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Wordman commented on: Among Secrets by Wordman 1 year 20 weeks ago
Thanks SSmoothie for such a: Thanks SSmoothie for such a great critique, I'm happy you found this to your liking.  I was watching my shadow melt into the last of a long day, and I thought it appropriate I deliver a eulogy.  
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Morningglory commented on: bitter sweet by Morningglory 1 year 20 weeks ago
it's funny like that: oops
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Morningglory commented on: I think I remember something by Morningglory 1 year 20 weeks ago
I drive myself crazy: crazy it makes me to mix myself up
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Morningglory commented on: I think I remember something by Morningglory 1 year 20 weeks ago
haha: I love this response. Unforgettable 
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Teytonon commented on: I think I remember something by Morningglory 1 year 20 weeks ago
You’re forgettable…: You're forgettable  That's what you are So forgettable Can't find your car? It must be somewhere  In the parking lot But where exactly  That's what you forgot Did you even take the car today? Are you sure? Really sure? You're forgettable  In every way So forgettable  Worse every day  That's why it's so incredible  That you think I'm unforgettable  You wanted to tell me But you forgot  What you wanted to say  
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