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georgeschaefer commented on: NOT KEN ENOUGH by georgeschaefer 1 year 11 weeks ago
just what the planet needs: : just what the planet needs:  a George Schaefer action figure--I mean doll.
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Wordman commented on: Rehearsal for Something Better by patriciajj 1 year 11 weeks ago
I do so like it here, it's: I do so like it here, it's always inspiring, and beautifully presented. Thank you Patricia, for sharing your gift. 
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Tetra_nova commented on: now, now, mouse by humanfruit 1 year 11 weeks ago
Ty.    I thought I should: Ty.    I thought I should clarify I meant it just is as in it just exists. also thanks for reading. I'm rewlly.enjoying yours as well! 
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Pungus commented on: now, now, mouse by humanfruit 1 year 11 weeks ago
take it or leave it: Well, after having read a few of your Poems, the recent ones, I can confidently fit myself in the category of sensing your obvious talent. And thank you very much for the comment.
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Tetra_nova commented on: Fade by Tetra_nova 1 year 11 weeks ago
Thank you again: That's very kind of you to say. I'm never sure what resonates with people so I just kind of try to draw comparison to conceptualizations 
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Tetra_nova commented on: now, now, mouse by humanfruit 1 year 11 weeks ago
.: heard that. no matter what people tell me I don't feel like it needs to be or is "good"  It just kind of is. 
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sudan commented on: Profile View by Miiranda31 1 year 11 weeks ago
So poetic: Words calm the pores, to strengthen it, to believe in life
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Tetra_nova commented on: Equalizer by Tetra_nova 1 year 11 weeks ago
.: Thank you again~ :) 
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Tetra_nova commented on: Equalizer by Tetra_nova 1 year 11 weeks ago
I have more on the way!: I had over 100 drafts that were in the "vault" as it were so I'm sure most of them will see the light of day at some point or another
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S74rw4rd commented on: Fade by Tetra_nova 1 year 11 weeks ago
Your verbal skill---highly: Your verbal skill---highly artistic and refined---is so consistent from line to line, and from poem to poem:  and, in my opinion, this is a powerful indicator of talent at the highest degree of quality.  You sure do have it, my friend!
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S74rw4rd commented on: Equalizer by Tetra_nova 1 year 11 weeks ago
Wow!  I don't think  I have: Wow!  I don't think  I have sufficient words to describe the effect of this evocation upon the reader's experience.  And your powerful phrases---in the fifth and sixth lines, and in the ninth and right on into the final line---summon a sense of something I cannot articulate, but it is very definitely present.  I hope to see many more of these from you; we can never have quite enough.
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S74rw4rd commented on: Lunch by Tetra_nova 1 year 11 weeks ago
And thank you for that: And thank you for that explanatory reply.  I look forward to reading more of your Poetry..
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ramonathompsont commented on: THOUGHTS ON ACTING by pamschwetz 1 year 11 weeks ago
very well written piece on a: very well written piece on a fine craft and artform
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Tetra_nova commented on: Lunch by Tetra_nova 1 year 11 weeks ago
Thank you. You're always very: Thank you. You're always very kind about my work    Im particularly foul mouthed in average speech and wanted to add a drop of my naturally visceral nature in since none of my other work contains that, usually.    You'll see it now and then as I'm starting to let loose the rest of my drafts. Sometimes it's necessary because I feel strongly about many subjects and it requires expletive emphasis.   I also wanted it to feel a little silly since I'm normally quite serious in my writing but I'm jovial in person.    Thanks for understanding! 
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S74rw4rd commented on: Lunch by Tetra_nova 1 year 11 weeks ago
Except for the expletive in: Except for the expletive in the final line, this is a magnificently evocative poem.  And that fourth line, the phrase "body of my want," is one of the finest I have ever read here, or elsewhere (and I have been reading Poetry for half a century as of this past April).
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