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Waiting In Line
Claim me for your line
Set me out and let me shine
In the sameness there
I’ve found the heart to dare
To lead me to forget
The world in which we’re set
Where we reluctantly find
The secrets buried in mind
Your line will help me see
The victims standing in front of me
But standing there poisoning me
The future gone and deadly free
Show me their memory
Of being what we’ll never see
Wend away through the lack
And end up in the great black
Cross me, stay in line
If I lie then I’m fine
The courage we’ve found
Is all that keeps me bound
Like chains that bound me to the floor
These places and thoughts from before
See me burning in your shadow
Leave me there falling so
Set me up in your line
Point your gun and drink your wine
And when your finished bleed me dry
Bathe in sadness and watch me cry
The pain stained forever I’ll know
Watching you throw dirt on me down below
Bury me at your feet
Good use of words, but a bit easy to lose my way in. I would try not to rhyme so much, and just let it flow. Could I suggest using some grammar to break it up, too?