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++!++Is You++!++
I can't believe it's happening all over agian
would you dance?
if i asked you to dance?
can you believe that this is for real once more?
I cant
Would you tremble?
If i touched your lips?
this is the way it should be
Do you believe?
in love in first sight?
I do
and it takes me on a flight
I knew i loved you the first time i saw you
that night at the battle
and your the reason i'm not sleeping lateley
your vision that you left behind keeps me awake
clenching my blanket
trying to catch my breath
because you took it away
suddenly it took me by suprise
you opened up my eyes
to the world of seeing
beautiful colours
people say that sure, you broke up
but if you both fall in love again
it must be meant to be
is it?
because i caqnnot stand not having you
the more i twist and turn
the more i need you now
i also can not erase the picture of your face
the touch of your hands
the softness of your lips
the sweetness of your kiss
this is a love unlike any i have experienced before
as you may see from the poems i have written
like this one
and its just flowing from my mind as i write.
hello my friend, we meet again
on this sleepless night
my dreams you are in
make me rocket to flight
i can see your face
and smell your sweet smell
it's been a while
where should we begin?
how about where we left off?
no?
i agree
it was too fast, too furious
when you are with me
i am free
and i cannot stand the thought of losing you again
i wil ltry all my might this time, to hold on
and not let go
but the truth may still stand
that it may not be for real,
but how can it not be?
i still have the chance
to prove my worth
i am worthy of you
and you are worthy of me
i am careless
and i believe
that this should not bring a tear to your eye
but it may
just like some of the others i have written have
but this is what my heart
and my soul are speaking.
not a thousand jumbled thoughts
just one
just one though
and that one thought
Is you.
A few gramattical errors, but a great poem if I do say so myself. Very powerful imagery, very powerful command of words, excellent command of subject, great use of diction... You've done an excellent job. Congratulations. I hope the girl comes back to you.
This really struck a chord with me. Reminds me of my ex. I still love him. This poem brought tears to my eyes.
Keep up the good work.
Charlie xx
i really like it..uve really got a handle for writing.. are u taking any sort of writing at ur hs?
the feeling u put in is really beautiful
Amazing, Quite Amazing, well wrote, and brought a tear to my eye, i'm absolutely sure, they girl will be lifted off her feet when she reads this, Amazing..
Great work
Bye