Comforting

 

It's rather comforting
Considering that I'm alive and that I do feel
All that time you spent ripping their hearts out,
Left me with a sweet awakening
"All this for me...you shouldn't have."
Really, You shouldn't have
Death will only cause us more trouble
Trouble being my middle name and all
Labelled above all as the extortionists
Denied attention by whom we crave it the most.

Control, precision stealth and balance
We devour and consume
You chose to leave her scathed and shaken
We wanted her finished...remember?
NO?!... I figured

Blood-stain sheets and eyes that dread their end
Share a spot next to you inside my cold heart

I'd say I'm mad but I believe its rather comforting

Considering that I'm dead and that I don't feel.

                                                                   

                                                                                           By Donique Brown and Alexus Rolle

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Dadio's picture

Well scribed. Enjoyed.

Well scribed. Enjoyed.

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Thank you so much!  We are

Thank you so much!  We are ecstatic that you enjoyed it as much as we did! Its a pleasure!


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nightlight1220's picture

I like "beauty"much better,

I like "beauty"much better, but this one has the same sort ofnstyle. Great write. The expression leaves one with a desire to question. Good poetry!!

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Thank you good sir! It's such

Thank you good sir! It's such a great pleasure to know you love our work and took the time to comment! 


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