Morning Love

Morning light hits your eyes

breaking your lids open wide

the sweet sounds that you make

are all that it takes

to make me feel like being alive

its funny how that morning light

seems to hit you just so right

to bring out your beauty

and those lovely eyes

and in that moment all that could be spoken

are lovely words from my heart; that which i have spoken

before, to you, and now again

I Love You Amy

forever and ever to the end


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Becky .........'s picture

Wow, this was so beautiful that I sent it to my boyfriend jsut to let him read it too (no worries, I let him know it was by you! hehe). I love the description, and I can see it vividly. I feel the same way about my boyfriend in the morning when I am able to wake up next to him. This was gorgeous thank you. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Grammar problems still exist, I suggest proof reading before posting.

Favorite line: to make me feel like being alive

that is so perfect

Amy Ramos's picture

Wow...
I really love this one. I don't really know what to say. I know you've read my poetry now so you know how I feel about you. I'm confused completely when it comes to that subject.

But I can let you know that I have never cared about anyone like I do for you. You mean so much to me and I love seeing you everyday. Every moment with you is like a blessing I feel I don't deserve, but I'm more than willing to take. ^_^

Well, you're sleeping right now, I just got back from band camp, so I'll go and let you sleep some more...

xoxoxo
Amy