A Rose

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The Rose

A rose on the table,

Plucked from a garden far away.

Poor beauty,

Born to die.

Does she have a soul?

Does she cry,

For days gone ,

Days of youth,

Growing blissfully unaware?

Does she thirst for the rain,

She once drank so freely?

A rose on the table,

Plucked from a garden.

Born to die.

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I have read this powerful poem twice now, and I really do think you ought to consider a sequence of poems about the rose. Your use of metaphor is well deployed, and a sequence following the entire life cycle of the rose would really showcase your obvious talent.


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