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Broken
Broken
She hears the snap inside,
The losing of her mind.
She is falling again.
Broken inside
Damaged goods,
Tossed away.
Only god knows
How hard she tries.
Broken
She hears the snap inside,
The losing of her mind.
She is falling again.
Broken inside
Damaged goods,
Tossed away.
Only god knows
How hard she tries.
Hey there :-) you critiqued some of my stuff ages ago; thought I'd see what was new with you! Like this one - I'm a sucker for the short and simple ones.
This is so exquisitely sad, in the most artistic way, that anything I can say about it would seem gauche. Therefore, I can only stand in respectful silence and applaud both your poetic accomplishment and, even moreso, who you are as a person. You are not just a poet, Rae; you are a living Poem.
Starward