Whoa Thats Sharp

Walking down the highway,

drinking from a bottle.

Blood pours from my arms,

where razors peirced skin.

Don't I deserve to die?

When does this end?

This is my life,

Now where is my knife?

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Susan Hines's picture

I liked the way you built your piece. This is the way most people feel at some time in their lives. Great job.
I smoke as well. I pray, someday, they take them away.
Keep the faith.
Thanks.
Susan

Pamela Lawrence's picture

well i've been there, done that, walking down the highway drinking from a bottle, blood pouring from my arms, so I can get inside that one. Been 30 years, but you don't forget moments like that, you always carry the scars both visible and invisible. I'm so grateful I don't have to feel like that anymore...all the wounds transformed themselves miraculously into gifts. Thank God I survived myself:-)