Love of my life

don't you wish love could last forever and a day?

i hope this feeling never goes away...

but somehow i can't help to feel,

that all of this is just too real

i'll wake up one morning to find

that this love is just an image of my mind.

and all of my hopes for the future so near,

have suddenly dissapeared.

but as for this love still with me now,

i think i'll just let it play out somehow

waiting for reality to be found,

and everything to come crashing to the ground.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this is my lastest poem 4/6/04...
explaining not how i believe love is bad, but how i doubt in it...

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S74rw4rd's picture

You have given excellent poetic expression (and, again I say, *excellent* poetic expression!) to a universal feeling; and you have made it very personal with the conversational tone of this poem. I applaud your verbal talent!!!!!


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Daniel P.'s picture

Love is good...enjoy it while you have it...