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Taking back your "A"
Theres something you've forgotten
right here along this line
i beileve its a letter
missing off this ryme
if you look a little closer
line 23
you wrote it like it wasnt you
instead of writing "me"
theres gold in that sentance
and there meaning's missing out
and i believe you missed a t
in that word after shout
wha do you mean you dont care
this is for your test
its got scribbles on the side
this seriously cant be your best
cant you see whats wrong with it?
the lettering is all small
there hardly any punctuation
and makes no sence at all
this poem is absolute rubbish
sorry but i have to say
you completely failed this subject
im taking back your "A"
uhmm im kinda freaked out by this i thought i'd read it over and ive only just realised the poem is about itself =S
im really freaked out by it coz it was random and off the top of my head liine after line and then... 10mins later i only just notice its about itself =S
see if you can notice it...
I aplogeise if you feel my poems are not correctly standardised or grammatically perfect - dark, too detailed, etc... Alot of my writing just flows all in one, so I try not to edit it afterwards otherwise I start changing the work- which h
THATS MADNESS!!!!!!!
youre an amazing writer letty-keep it up!!!!