It took me some time
to finally find thee
i searched the ends of the earth
but you were right in front of me
i was blind,and couldnt believe
that it's you that i've been longing for
maybye this time it will work
as we've shared our love before
not really love i suppose
jst a glimpse sometimes a stare
that we shared in the room
we've met here and there
but now i finally know you
and we've shared a first kiss
it's ironic that it's you
and my heart feels like this
i thought i could only look
just look and not touch
and now i can hold you
i really love you soo much
people wont understand
they couldn't possibly see
what it feels like
when you're holding me
and when you are
i count your heartbeats in time
Coz im just amazed that
i can call you mine
-x-
have u ever thought about makein a book? IT WUD SELL! ID BUY IT LOL!
love ya sis
xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
this is really good. I love it actually. I really liked your title, thats what brought me to look at it. I also like how you rhyme ( i cant live without rhyme) and the language you chose and how well it flows.
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