so far frm real

It took me some time

to finally find thee

i searched the ends of the earth

but you were right in front of me

i was blind,and couldnt believe

that it's you that i've been longing for

maybye this time it will work

as we've shared our love before

not really love i suppose

jst a glimpse sometimes a stare

that we shared in the room

we've met here and there

but now i finally know you

and we've shared a first kiss

it's ironic that it's you

and my heart feels like this

i thought i could only look

just look and not touch

and now i can hold you

i really love you soo much

people wont understand

they couldn't possibly see

what it feels like

when you're holding me

and when you are

i count your heartbeats in time

Coz im just amazed that

i can call you mine



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kayla's picture

have u ever thought about makein a book? IT WUD SELL! ID BUY IT LOL!
love ya sis
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Halee Brown's picture

this is really good. I love it actually. I really liked your title, thats what brought me to look at it. I also like how you rhyme ( i cant live without rhyme) and the language you chose and how well it flows.

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