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This feeling is me

This feeling is you

This feeling is we

This feeling is for 2

This is feeling is healing

This feeling’s a crime

This feeling is breathing

This feeling’s a mime

This feeling’s a flower

This feeling’s a youth

This feeling is power

This feeling is truth

This feeling’s a ripple

This feeling is steel

This feeling is simple

This feeling is real 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

My first poem ever... hope you like it x 

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©19 February 2013 - 12:37am — xMercuryx
19 February 2013 - 2:40am — Justanotherdepr...
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EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:) I like it! My first poem that I ever wrote was called "What Happens When I Eat Despair". It was written when I was in 3rd grade. Maybe I should post it.

Undecided-Is my lowly, 13 year old life.

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autocorrect sucks, btw

19 February 2013 - 12:35pm — xMercuryx
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Thanks!

Thanks a lot! Im glad you liked it 
I think you should post it... it sounds really interesting
It will be nice to read it