+I Thought+

I thought you were gone: missing or dead

“She still aint returned” is what your friends said

I was worried about you, full of pain

But to you my hurt was just a game

I kept my hopes up; I had to stay strong,

A reply to my messages, I waited for so long

I heard nothing for two weeks or so

You don’t understand that I felt so low







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Afzal Shauq's picture

perfect thought.. I feel like you are writing from the core of heart because the depth your thoughts show faith of our kindness being true humankind..some how philosophical touches are also found..means you have ability to perceive things well.. thats why if you never stop writing will be good and one you will have a book of your work in hand.. the talent must be preserved..and you seem enough talented and got reality based intentions.. well done, really appreciate your work and your words too