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Constant Sorrow
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Dolour Wailing in the illusion
Shadows warring the frantic heart
Always sensing the whispers of you
against the flesh, the taste of kisses shared
Taint this soul in to submisson
Ache, laying here just to live
Die, only to be with you.
Step through our dreams.
This reality where we cant be,
always warring when I just want love.
This fog that intoxicates daily life.
Always seeking, but finding naught.
The ache is winning all senses over.
The sense of your touch haunts the pale flesh.
Quivering heart, feeble pulse.
Wishing for the other half.
Yen for the complete.
The lust hunger I suffer.
This sorrow I could not imagine.
Wonder if you suffer the same?
enthralling
dolour... good word choice... although there is a lot of sadness... theres a beauty in the yearning... and lust... I really loved reading this :)
Thank you
Lately, I have been trying to find different words for the common words. Happy-bliss. Sad-dolour. Etc. Describe things differently, as I see them and maybe try to speak it clear enough to be understood.
Again, thank you and I am glad you enjoyed the read.
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I am an artist of words as well as paints.
Same Word Syndrome
Yes, I admit it, I use the Word Thesaurus when I get fed up with saying it the same way. Teach us new ways of saying, Wulfman! ~slc~
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I try my best
New is not bad. Scary, yes but it could be good.
My life machine stalls when the pen scribbles no poetry...
Read. Read anything and everything. Even the bad, the ugly and the worst between the good, the awesome and the epic.
If one doesn't open the mind or heart, learns very little. Knowledge is greater strength.
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I am an artist of words as well as paints.