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My Final Prayer
Lord,here i am one more time
on my knees crying out to you
Do you know me lord,do you know my name
is it real or just a game
a fabel from years of old stories
being told,and told
Are you there?do you hear me
do you even care,you say that i am your child
you say you love me,but i don`t know any more
I pray to you lord most every day
but i don`t think you hear a word that i say
You say you love me,you call me son
but my life lord seems so over run
i cry out for help but i get none
am i lord am i really your son
When you talk to preachers they say you did`nt
do it the right way,i thought it only needed
to come from the heart thats where prayer really starts
But lord for 29.95 they will show you the way
a book,a tape,a quick prayer and your on your way
But lord i don`t have 29.95 what do i do
i`m down on my knees crying out to you
so please lord show me the way
before my heart hardens and i turn away...
I can relate to that. Well written. It needs punctuation and capitalization, but other than that, I like the message.
A prayer should never be final, Lord hears, sees and knows.
the question is do you hear, see and know.
I really like this piece, most people do feel this way, and when you have a strong relationship, the doubt should never cross the mind, the love is always in your heart.