So your heart has been
broken time and again
Well i`m the one
that can mend
Put your heart
in the potters hand
I will mend that broken
heart so you can love again
I will write poetry
to you everyday
I will love you
in a special way.
So darling say that
you`ll be mine
And i will love you
till the end of time...
Ron,
Very beautiful write.. I love how you used the Potters Wheel and his hands as mending the heart... very good idea.
Peace and Love..
Judy
I enjoyed reading this poem a lot from the visualizations to the emotions to the content to the title. You incorporated all these things wonderfully and it did make one beautiful vase. I saw this poem started out as a lump of clay that you worked until it was ready to go on the potter's wheel as your hands made into a vase to hold the flower of your love to bloom in front of the lady you want to heal from the inside out and turn that tear of heartache into a tear of happiness. In any case, I loved this poem and I hope to read more by you.
Wow, so sweet and beautiful....i really love it!
Love
Crystal....p.s. dont stop writting!