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Winds Of Time
The winds of time
blowing gently through my mind
telling me things long forgot
that I had placed deep into my mind
the sweet sound of your voice
the gentleness of your touch
the love that you gave
that I need so much
I long for your kiss
your sweet touch
I miss you so much
do you still love me
I know that you do
cause the winds of time
is blowing on you too...
Ron, I enjoyed your poem very much. However your may owe me a dollar for using my poem's name, I wrote my "Winds of Time" 23 years ago.
Keep writing.
lol
Jen
love this one ,it's so romantic
Wow, i know how this feels...i really like this poem, its really sweet and loving....and i love it!
Love
Crystal
It's nice to see someone using the basic couplet format, even if one stanza falls out of the pattern to show how feelings can be too hard to organize in a tight bundle. Your emotions here are raw, but safely tucked in as you play a pull and hide effect. You tell of whispering winds reminding you of her sleek tongue, exploring fingernails, and all, but you get to your emotions you keep them at bay by not going fully into them, which is the hide effect. It works extremely well here and made me think about what went on in your relationship. I couldn't help smiling when I got to you stating she still loves you and feels the wind singing your bitter, sweet love song.