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I close my eyes,and i drift away

 

into that magic place where you stay

 

 

In dreams you`ll always be mine

 

I can hold you until the end of time

 

 

I can hear those soft words you used to say

 

when you made love to me in that special way

 

 

In my dreams you will always be mine

 

in my dreams I’ll love you until the end of time

 

 

You still hold the keys to my heart

 

in my dreams we never part...

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©12 June 2021 - 10:06pm — word_man
16 June 2021 - 12:19pm — word_man
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thanks for the visit

thanks for the visit pat,always appreciated

ron parrish

16 June 2021 - 4:08am — patriciajj
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Another dreamy and lyrical

Another dreamy and lyrical heartsong that flutters irresistibly from beginning to end. I always enjoy your poems' impeccable soundwork that wafts in the mind, even after the last line is read. 

 

Enchanting. 

13 June 2021 - 1:59am — SSmoothie
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I like the beautiful flow in

I like the beautiful flow in this poem, 

I like everything about it except the second line though appropropro I read the m word as mystical rather than sinister magik, despite this beautifully and sensitively rendered hugss 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

13 June 2021 - 3:22am — word_man
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thanks for the visit,there

thanks for the visit,there only sinister if that`s in your heart..to the rest of the world just a word

ron parrish